Ryo Umiyashi

[ryo]

Name: Ryo Umiyashi

Age: 12

Rank: Genin

Village: Konoha

Appearance: Stands at about 5'05", blue/green eyes, short black hair, with a thin yet athletic build.

History: Ryo was born in to a normal a normal family, with parents and an older sister named Akiha. At the age of 2, Ryo's parents died leaving Akiha to raise him. At the age of 10, Ryo came home one day and had found out his sister had left, since then he has lived alone.

Personality:

Learned Justus

Weapons/Items: 2 Bracers and 2 Greaves

Goals (Optional): To find his older sister.

[Kaguya Yoh]

OK FIrst things first your not very detailed on the appereance all you describe is his body, you don't describe anything he's wearing.

Your history isn't all the long yeah it gets the main point across, but try to get more detailed into it after all try to get into your charcater more.

Also you didn't put anything for your personality, nor did you list any jutsus so please change those thigs and then you'll be approved