Post by Krimson on Dec 10, 2006 23:31:08 GMT -5
I saw everyone making Fan fic and decide that I would give it a shot
Time: When Krimson was young, secluded from the rest of the village in her farm outside town and all the events leading up to current time
Places: Negua Family Farm
Main Characters: Krimson Negua, Imown Negua, Kage Negua, Misugi Negua, Kan Negua, Frono Negua
Minor Characters(like, they don't talk or are only seen once):
Events:
~Krimson's first acknowledgment of Kakuo, Negua clan demon
~Krimson killing older brother
The golden rays of light slowly leaked into the small bedroom shared by two young girls. the oldest of the two awoke first. her red eyes slowly opened as she slipped away from the sand man's grip. a gloved hand came up from under the covers and wiped away a stray strand of red hair. her head slowly floated from the pillow as she looked at the wolf-dog sleeping on the rug in the middle of the room. she climbed out of bed and stretched. a yawn escaped her mouth as she walked over to a closet. quickly she changed from her night time clothes to her normal outfit.
The young red heads name was Krimson. she was the eldest daughter of the Negua family in the Sand village. she quietly opened the door and sneaked into the kitchen.
The second girl woke up about and hour later. her short black hair was in a slight mess as her green eyes looked around the room.
"Krimson woke up before me again! oh well.....wake up Woofy"
the young girl said to the now awakened wolf-dog. she hurried up and walked over to a counter where the small hairbrush was. she brushed the knots from her hair. she hurried through the closet, finding a outfit and rushing into the kitchen for her breakfast.
In the kitchen, Krimson was at a small table, eating some food that her mother had made for the family. two teen aged boys were at the table talking about what they would do for that day. a man was at the table with a empty plate in front of him. a cigarette was lit and in his mouth as he watched Imown walk into the kitchen finally.
"Finally decided to join us huh?"
Misugi said with a smile as he opened his arms for his youngest daughter to come running in. Imown ran to her father for a hug and ate breakfast on his lap. Krimson looked back at her sister and smiled.
"Mom can I go play outside? I'm done with my Breakfast"
she said walking up to the woman at the sink and handed her a spotless plate.
"Of coarse you can honey"
Kage said with a warm smile as she went back to her dishes. as Krimson got to the door her two older brothers rushed passed her, knocking her to the floor.
"Kan, Frono watch what your doing!"
Kage said, yelling at the two boys.
Kage:
Misugi:
Kan:
Frono:
Krimson pouted as she walked outside into the fields of the farm. as she walked, Woofy came up behind her with a small rubber ball in his mouth. Krimson smiled as she grabbed the ball from the dogs mouth and threw it toward the chicken coops.
"ow.....who threw this?!"
came her oldest brother, Frono's voice. he looked around and there was Krimson, the only one around. she watched as he walked up to her, his hands clenched. he smacked her across the face.
"I was doing chores and you hit me in the head with a-"
he stopped as his sister turned around. her pupils had turned to cat like ones and strange tiger stripes were now on her face. her nails were long and sharp and on top of her head were a pair of furry tiger ears. he backed away, falling to the ground and crawling back wards, his eyes were full of fright.
she lunged at him and a fight started. they punched and kicked each other. Frono emitted a blood curling scream that echoed through the property. Kage and Misugi ran outside to see their son dead. scratch and bite marks were left on his body and a stab would through the chest, causing his death. next to him lay Krimson. she was littered with bruises and small cuts but she was only unconscious.
Kage Broke down. she hugged her dead son, her tears dripping down her face and onto his. Misugi carried Krimson inside and set her in her bed where she stayed for a few days. he came back outside with a shovel.
"we can't let the people of the village know our daughter has a demon within. she will not be kept alive if the village finds out so she must stay here. we already have that Gaara kid who has the demon in him they don't need another."
Misuga said as he took Frono's body from his wifes arms. later that night he sneaked into the graveyard and buried his son in a grave, unmarked and left un attended unlike the others there.
when he returned home, him and Kage walked into his daughter's room. . In Kage's hands was a black choker that had a blackened diamond that held a unique seal to it. they lifted up there daughters head and fit the choker on. when the back was sealed together Krimson's tiger stripes went down almost disappearing except on her arms and back.
"that should keep Kakuo sealed in her...or at least now he won't come out as easliy.."
Misugi said taking his Wife out of the room. Misugi locked the door and it closed with a soft click
stuff for this chapter
Time: When Krimson was young, secluded from the rest of the village in her farm outside town and all the events leading up to current time
Places: Negua Family Farm
Main Characters: Krimson Negua, Imown Negua, Kage Negua, Misugi Negua, Kan Negua, Frono Negua
Minor Characters(like, they don't talk or are only seen once):
Events:
~Krimson's first acknowledgment of Kakuo, Negua clan demon
~Krimson killing older brother
~Chapter one~
-The Demon within-
-The Demon within-
The golden rays of light slowly leaked into the small bedroom shared by two young girls. the oldest of the two awoke first. her red eyes slowly opened as she slipped away from the sand man's grip. a gloved hand came up from under the covers and wiped away a stray strand of red hair. her head slowly floated from the pillow as she looked at the wolf-dog sleeping on the rug in the middle of the room. she climbed out of bed and stretched. a yawn escaped her mouth as she walked over to a closet. quickly she changed from her night time clothes to her normal outfit.
The young red heads name was Krimson. she was the eldest daughter of the Negua family in the Sand village. she quietly opened the door and sneaked into the kitchen.
The second girl woke up about and hour later. her short black hair was in a slight mess as her green eyes looked around the room.
"Krimson woke up before me again! oh well.....wake up Woofy"
the young girl said to the now awakened wolf-dog. she hurried up and walked over to a counter where the small hairbrush was. she brushed the knots from her hair. she hurried through the closet, finding a outfit and rushing into the kitchen for her breakfast.
In the kitchen, Krimson was at a small table, eating some food that her mother had made for the family. two teen aged boys were at the table talking about what they would do for that day. a man was at the table with a empty plate in front of him. a cigarette was lit and in his mouth as he watched Imown walk into the kitchen finally.
"Finally decided to join us huh?"
Misugi said with a smile as he opened his arms for his youngest daughter to come running in. Imown ran to her father for a hug and ate breakfast on his lap. Krimson looked back at her sister and smiled.
"Mom can I go play outside? I'm done with my Breakfast"
she said walking up to the woman at the sink and handed her a spotless plate.
"Of coarse you can honey"
Kage said with a warm smile as she went back to her dishes. as Krimson got to the door her two older brothers rushed passed her, knocking her to the floor.
"Kan, Frono watch what your doing!"
Kage said, yelling at the two boys.
Kage:
Misugi:Kan:
Frono:Krimson pouted as she walked outside into the fields of the farm. as she walked, Woofy came up behind her with a small rubber ball in his mouth. Krimson smiled as she grabbed the ball from the dogs mouth and threw it toward the chicken coops.
"ow.....who threw this?!"
came her oldest brother, Frono's voice. he looked around and there was Krimson, the only one around. she watched as he walked up to her, his hands clenched. he smacked her across the face.
"I was doing chores and you hit me in the head with a-"
he stopped as his sister turned around. her pupils had turned to cat like ones and strange tiger stripes were now on her face. her nails were long and sharp and on top of her head were a pair of furry tiger ears. he backed away, falling to the ground and crawling back wards, his eyes were full of fright.
she lunged at him and a fight started. they punched and kicked each other. Frono emitted a blood curling scream that echoed through the property. Kage and Misugi ran outside to see their son dead. scratch and bite marks were left on his body and a stab would through the chest, causing his death. next to him lay Krimson. she was littered with bruises and small cuts but she was only unconscious.
Kage Broke down. she hugged her dead son, her tears dripping down her face and onto his. Misugi carried Krimson inside and set her in her bed where she stayed for a few days. he came back outside with a shovel.
"we can't let the people of the village know our daughter has a demon within. she will not be kept alive if the village finds out so she must stay here. we already have that Gaara kid who has the demon in him they don't need another."
Misuga said as he took Frono's body from his wifes arms. later that night he sneaked into the graveyard and buried his son in a grave, unmarked and left un attended unlike the others there.
when he returned home, him and Kage walked into his daughter's room. . In Kage's hands was a black choker that had a blackened diamond that held a unique seal to it. they lifted up there daughters head and fit the choker on. when the back was sealed together Krimson's tiger stripes went down almost disappearing except on her arms and back.
"that should keep Kakuo sealed in her...or at least now he won't come out as easliy.."
Misugi said taking his Wife out of the room. Misugi locked the door and it closed with a soft click
