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Post by Kaguya Yoh on Oct 29, 2006 22:11:49 GMT -5
Jutsu Name: Muma No Justu
Jutsu Descriptin: An A-Rank genjutsu that can't not be destroyed by using "kai" nor with pain. Once trapped in the jutsu they see whatever the user wishes them to see which is mainly an enemy to the one traped. The illultion continues to put the one down to make them feel weak and wrothless as the ilution continues to attack them. Only way to get out is to beat the words of the illution
(not very good but I suck at describtions)
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Rikuda Hao
Genin
Lord of the Heartless
And let it be a leason to you all
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Post by Rikuda Hao on Nov 13, 2006 23:25:41 GMT -5
Jutsu Name: Hokaku Kon Dan
Jutsu Description: Rank C: A jutsu which first comes as a blue orb in the user's hand which they throw at their opponent which locks them in a paralyzing ball of light. This ball explodes upon contact with anything, but the user.
Jutsu Name: Touketsuken
Jutsu Description: Rank B: With this he has the ability to freeze anything with a quick blast from his hand or sword
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Post by Rokubi on Nov 15, 2006 20:12:12 GMT -5
Names: Kaze and Takeda
Ages: 21 and 23
Name: Final Battle Field
Rank: A
Description: This is an incredibly powerful Genjutsu created by Takeda and Kaze.This tech starts off by shrowding the fighters(there can be more than just two people inside)in a dark shadowy zone, as though they were transported into another dimension. Inside this zone the fighters body change to a black and white sort of coloring all over they're body. A large amount of White swords begin to line the walls around this zone, these swords can be freely controled by the user. The user of this tech's spead is greatly increased, allowing him to move faster than his opponent in order to strike.
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Post by Kaji on Nov 15, 2006 20:14:38 GMT -5
Uh, Takeda. You know that it's a Genjutsu, it really isn't a final fight. Since you impale them with swords and what not, it wouldn't cause any real physical pain...just emotional and fatigue so you can't really kill them or the "opponent dies or user is defeated" in a Genjutsu realm...
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Post by Rokubi on Nov 15, 2006 20:19:10 GMT -5
This Justu attacks the brain and makes the user believe that they are dead, if the body thinks that its died then it will stop working. The same thing happened to Kakashi and Sasuke There bodies almost broke down and died.
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Post by Kaji on Nov 15, 2006 20:30:03 GMT -5
Yes, almost broke down and died by the most POWERFUL genjutsu in the world. Don't try and tell me that this justu is better, and will actually kill you. I mean for one, this is no Mangekyou sharigan Genjutsu. I mean being stabbed endlessly by Itachi for 99 hours would indefiniately KILL you...but did they die, no...
For one Takeda can't have an S-ranked Genjutsu thats on par with the Mangekyou, a massive list of Ninjutsu, and uses a sword and skilled with Taijutsu...it's simply too much.
For example, Kaji, I traded off absolutely NO gejutsu skills for really good Taijutsu and Ninjutsu skills. You can't have like S-ranked techniques in every category, especially ones that rival the best Genjutsu in the Naruto series that evoke actual Death to the user. Even the Death forseeing technique doesn't do that.
You already have a bloodline, A lot of Ice moves, Wind moves, Water moves, now this beast Genjutsu, and skill with a sword. Your characters a genin for gods sake, and I don't care how much you persist that your awakened Takeda is "Sannin" level...An 18 year old, can master all these moves. Theres a place where I draw the line between an 18 year-old thats trying to evoke past the prodigy Itachi...
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Post by Rokubi on Nov 15, 2006 20:38:34 GMT -5
I didnt even bother reading that entire angry post Its not that powerful, the people inside can still use there ninjustu, genjutsu and taijutsu. Unlike Itachi's technique, this move is extremely weak in comparison to that. This is mearly an offencive genjutsu move, just like any other genjutsu except without the cheap, "I can escape if I bite my lip" thing. Im not trying to be unfair or better than anyone, just trying to get by. And I will no longer read anymore of your long angry posts.
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Post by Kaji on Nov 15, 2006 20:48:11 GMT -5
It wasn't angry at all...Your just being ridiculous. I don't understand why you want to make your GENIN character so powerful. Even in his awakened form he shouldn't be that powerful.
Also the fact that you can't "Kai" or use pain on a genjutsu used by a non-genjutsu specialist. You can even do that on the most advanced of Genjutsu, you just have to know when to do it. Trying to get by? please...you trying to be godly. Just look at your jutsu list. For one, I've told you many times about your Takeda characters Ice jutsus, which are signature to a specific person of snow.
I'm not yelling, I'm just telling you that a genjutsu that you can't use pain or Kai to get rid of is advanced, and normally used by Genjutsu specialists. I mean 75 percent of Kidate's Jutsus can be disaffected like that and she's a specialist. I'm just saying that you can't have everything Takeda...no one does. A a bloodline, dozens of ninjutsu, sword wielding and taijutsu, Multiple summonings, and now a unblockable genjutsu is a little much, and your abilitiy to use three Jutsu natures is a little much.
And I'd like to bring up the fact that over 65 percent of your Jutsus are A rank or higher...
I'll talk it over with the other mods, and I'm sure they won't approve...most of them are more of a stickler about these kind of things than I am.
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Post by Rokubi on Nov 15, 2006 20:51:27 GMT -5
This Technique cant be used by Takeda why do you keep mentioning him? Its a tech used mainly by Kaze they just invented it together, Takeda doesnt use it how can he? This is like Jounin level, i think I mentioned that Also I dont get why only mods are allowed to make Sannin level fighters, arent the rest of us treated with iquality?
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Post by Kaji on Nov 15, 2006 20:58:15 GMT -5
No you didn't mention that, It said Kaze AND Takeda
For Kaze it would be fine, but Takeda is maxed out.
The following sannin level OC characters are Kusanagi and Kenji and their both over 40 years old...while your charcters are early twenty's...
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Post by Kaji on Nov 15, 2006 21:03:41 GMT -5
Note all the other posts, it's the name of the user of the Jutsu...
I'll allow Takeda to increase his Jutsu library in Ninjutsu but no extremely advanced Genjutsu. One can't be really advanced at every ninja art. Adding more invented Ninjutsu is completly valid for Takeda...and I'll allow that.
The Jutsu is fine for Kaze to use.
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Post by Rokubi on Dec 8, 2006 21:00:52 GMT -5
Living Users: Takeda and Kaze
Deceased users: Jûno Hasegi
Jutsu Name: Heaven's White Release
Jutsu Description: This is an S-Rank Jutsu, everyones body has a chakra container which holds chakra and will refill itself once some has been used. This jutsu forcibly creates a second container in the body to hold another supply of chakra, this chakra grows much faster than regular chakra therfore over time it could grow to levels unamaginable. Takeda, Kaze and Jûno used this jutsu when they were twelve, Takeda and Kaze are twenty-five now. Their containers started out as just another supply of the same amount of the chakra, in other words since Takeda was born with an already immence amount of chakra his container would grow faster and bigger than Kaze's would.
Drawbacks: Gives the users a pure white eye color, and if all of the chakra in the secondary containers is used up than there is a 95% chance the user will fall into a dorment state for an uncalculable amount of time.
Differences in usage: When Kaze uses this technique, he only has three forms, an initial release, a second release, and a final release. However, because Takeda was born with a huge amount of chakra given to him upon his Mizukage father's death, Takeda has more levels because he has stronger chakra, he has an Initial release, a Solar Release, a Lunar Release, a Final Release, and an Ultimate Release that gives him a massive amount of chakra from seemingly nowhere.
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Post by Kaguya Yoh on Dec 17, 2006 3:57:36 GMT -5
Jutsu Name: Chi Ryujin En Bu
Jutsu Descriptin: An A-rank justu where chakra builds up around the ground of the user then with either a swing from their arm/weapon an explotion of chakra is cuased must damage to people and can easily destorying matirals around. The closer one is to the user the more damage they recive.
Jutsu Name: Kai Ryu Ha
Jutsu Descriptin: A B-ranks justu where the user puts chakra into their blade then with a slash they let go of the chakra sending three slashes of chakra tat their opponent. Used in for long range and requires perfect chakra control or else the slashes will not go where the user wants it to or can slash at the user.
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Post by blink on Dec 18, 2006 1:36:33 GMT -5
Jutsu Name: Path of Peace (don't know translation...)
Description: A-rank. Invented by a former Nin in Taj's religious order and mastered by the Kaguya monk, this Jutsu uses the caster's chakra, as a spark to draw the living spirit of the land up and imediataly heal all wounds suffered by all individuals within 300 feet of the caster for as long as caster remains focused and retains enough chakra. Manifests as glowing leylines radiating from caster's feet.
(Decent?)
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Post by Rokubi on Dec 22, 2006 21:18:51 GMT -5
Jutsu Name: Cutting Moon
Description: When the moon is present the user can swing there sword and a large amount of chakra in the shape of a crescent moon will fly towards there target. The chakra is strong enough to cut through a Rashoman Gate if used in conjunction with the right sword(Namely one of the 21 legendary blades) and the right amount of chakra.
Jutsu Name: Lunar Remorse
Description: When the Moon is out the user of this technique can increase the effectiveness of Water Jutsu, including using less chakra for a powerful water jutsu. This is a useful jutsu for water users.
Jutsu Name: Lunar Flash
Description: The user jumps into the air and using the same requirement of the first technique, sends a HUGE energy blast of pure chakra directly towards the enemy. This jutsu is extremely fast and as powerful as a four-tail Naruto Chakra blast, meaning it can go through three Rashoman gates with ease.
Note: Event without the prescence of the moon, Cutting Moon and Lunar Crescent are still extremely powerful. Its just when there is a moon, then they become almost unstopable.
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